This is simply a fantastic scene. One quibble, I wish it wasn't cropped so tightly on the bottom - the man along the bottom just left of center is cropped off, which disrupts the wholeness of the image to me. I suppose I'd like to see all three of the 'real' people entirely within the composition, to contrast further with the fragmented nature of the 'art' person, does this make sense? Lovely work, though!
already have my mistakes pointed out. ...and i agree with you... Thanks for your critique. the comments, must be like this , here on DA ......it will be a great help in “making us better”!!!!
You're welcome. I'm not trying to be paternalistic or anything, just a lot of people seem to appreciate constructive criticism, so I try to give it when I feel like I have something to add.
and thanks for coming by and looking at my work